Thursday, March 10, 2011

Poetic Musings

The finality of some things
Strikes
Hard

The brutality of spring
Descends
Marred

The pinpoint of hope
Peeks
Through

The barrier of reality
Stands
Anew

The wind of change
Blows
Constantly

The fear of unknown
Flows
Unnervingly

The sands of time may
Build
Castles

The starry eyes... can
Remain
Unfilled

The hand of fate
Intervenes
Pushes

The scalar life
Suddenly
Vectorizes

Copyright Uni_IdioticPoemIKnow-oony_2011


8 comments:

Noor said...

not that idiotic you know ;)

Ahmar said...

The scalar life
Suddenly
Vectorizes

From scalar to vector is quite an achievement (y), may Allah help you remain steadfast and focused in your goals and direction chosen.. :)

Dawson said...

Wow.
I have my eyes wide open :)
Way to go!!

anummunaf said...

wow.... amazing post

Moon said...

Beautiful piece of poetry ..

Uni said...

@Noor
It's not?
Wow, thanks!

@Ahmar
Ameen!

@Dawson
Hain, :D, waqai? .. Cool! Thanks :)

@Anum
Thanks so much *very surprised*

@Moon
Thanks very much :)

Thanks all for dropping by!

[and for liking/encouraging at the post] :)

majworld said...

this fear of unknown makes this life v hard to understand. nd may b this life is more vector which requires a direction at every instant..nice poem..

Uni said...

@Majworld
That's an interesting observation, and I think very true. We need constant guidance in our directions chosen.

Thanks for liking the poem, and for dropping by!